To: Instyle Magazine
From: Meliza Chan
Subject: Lip Gloss
Oh, Ladies!
“Yes, it’s ladies nght, and the feelings right” but wait, your lips are bland, and need a bit of color. You grab your lip gloss, and there’s no light or mirror, so you “wing it”.
“Wing” no more! Artistry, one of your top selling prestige skin care and makeup brands, has developed a lip gloss with you in mind! On the go? Staying Home? Whatever it may be, this product is for you! It conveniently shaped to fit in all types of bags and wristlets; and created with a built in LED light and mirror for dark applications.
Glitz (110383), Champagne (110382), and Passion (110381) are three shades that are bound to match all skin types. There are sure to add a beautiful shine to your lips.
FOR ONLY LIMITED TIME ONLY $15 or 2 for $25!
Contact me for more information!
Meliza
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Meliza Chan
Artistry Consultant
123-456-7896
Well written. I like the description you used and the enthusiasm that was put into the writing. I'm sorry to say this would not be something I will not be purchasing.
ReplyDeleteI would totally buy this stuff. Sounds too good to be true! The 2 for $25 deal has me sold :) Nice work, sounds professional
ReplyDeleteI think you have a good invention here Meliza :)Very catchy!
ReplyDeleteNicely constructed and the sales pitch sounded pretty professional.
ReplyDeleteSounds like a fabulous product. Love your opening line! "Wait, should I cite this?" haha ;)
ReplyDeleteSounds like you are going to have no problem with sales Meliza! I like your enthusiasm too!
ReplyDeleteYou got me wanting this product for sure! It's super hard to find good makeup so I'd love to try this!
ReplyDeleteGreat pitch. I kinda want to try some for myself.
ReplyDeleteI love this idea! Can you make this a reality, please? Haha! :)
ReplyDeleteHaha I second Sam's comment about citing it. Oh, how I don't want to graduate in May. I'll miss you guys...
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